Level 3 – 8/10
WWW
Like the black and white and casual feel of band on cover. Panels look ok.
Has the feel of small independent band, image conveys some sense of attitude etc
EBI
Consider same font for mothership on back and spine as front cover, otherwise too many fonts, likewise the M must be the same as the LARGE iconic M on back panel is different.
You’ve missed out the name of the record label in your legal spiel.
Poster Level 2 6/10
WWW
Overall, good feel to this in black and white and good continuity across the products.
Range of conventions followed with release, review etc
EBI
Too busy; shrink down size of review to bottom third of page. Lose the heading at the top in the arrow style symbol. Keep picture of cd and other bits.
Layout of bottom third is wrong, try and lay these out in a more symmetrical fashion.
Likewise reduce size of font for websites, they are currently too large (and too different)
Could a think white line go above the album sleeve image?
Looking at my feedback given a fair amount of corrections need to be made during the process of making my final Digipak & Poster, it is important that I carry out this feedback to get the best possible marks that are available.
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